§ Footprints § Comments

But, let us move with better steps in the future. Thanks for sharing.

Beautiful poem. The last two lines tell the whole of poem....Loved reading it.

The moment you realize that you are a sinner and feel repentance over it, you are a redeemed person and no need for further condemnation! Vipins, this is undoubtedly a wonderful poem!

Vipins, so profound thought you injected here.Loved the wordings and the rich imagery.

THE POEM CALM MY MIND AND GIVES A PLEASURE TO MY SOUL…………………………………. THIS IS REALLY GREAT, YOU R TOO MUCH TALENTED, THE WAY YOU PENNED THE POEM IS REALLY PRAISE WORTHY, WELL WORDED, A WELL CRAFTED POEM INDEED, I LIKE THE POEM AS YOU LIKE IT. PLEASE READ MY POEM, I WANT TO DIE’’

Simply Marvelous............ your poems offer great depth.... i bow to you! !

Yon! You have won my heart with ethereal poetic lines like these. I feel that you have done the same to many others like me. Tut! Modern men sold his heart and soul for technology and evil in the world of plastic smiles............ 'Where I lost my chastity of heart and virginity of soul. And now my heart is broken and sectile. I wished for a cherubic heart once. But the voracious mouth of sin engulfed me.' Slowly but certainly my heart is drifting towards the creator of this poem. If i have to grade this poem I give A1 grade to the poem. Dear Vipins, keep sharing and enlightening us with poems like these.........................................

I won't argue with a man who seems to know what he is talking about...What a marvelous poem, describing your own hellish experience with such vividness. But, if you look around, you will see the footprints of those who have travelled the same road before...

Well, after THAT i definitely cleaning out my act, no more.... but seriously the language is brilliant, the message awakening.... Excellente

IT IS A NICE THOUGHT THAT YOU ACKNOLEDGE YOUR SINS AND NOT LET OTHERS FOLLOW YOUR FOOTSTEPS NICE POEM -GIVING OTHERS SOMETHING TO THINK ABOUT

Excellent poem! One of my favorites.

excellent depiction of your footprints through the path of a eternal world......well written...

Very nice. I like it. Sam

Great imagery and everything is just amazing :)

Agree with stephanie, i like this line 'And so don't follow my footprints'...your advice for new comers of life trackers... Eric also share you good and wise advice, you will find a light and know how important it is when you in darkness...we once make a mistake and maybe soon or after this we make a new one....but having mistakes not mean we will falling forever and life is not great..it's normal to fall coz it have hidden message...it whispering a call to wake up 'you need to stop from be routine person, but try bigger'... Keep positive and we will find one day the footprints out of dark! _Unwritten Soul

yes, but only when you embrace the darkness inside yourself will you find the light! good journey poem!

reach here in a nadir like me. And we cannot open our mouth, once again it is superb temperament u have shown here for the write.....exquisite write..

Very wise words Vipins, excellent write

Wow, very striking. I love this one. 'And so don't follow my footprints.' This is a beautiful line to end your poem with.