Footprints Comments

I like this alot David. The language is romantique but that is okay because the structures of the stanzasand the use of rhyme is well crafted. Rhyming is seen as passe in some quarters. Me, I like it when it is done well and even some predictable rhyme works when placed in a fitting context. This was notsomething that was dashed off; itshowsthe pen of a craftsman and the labour pays dividends.

This is a profound poem is filled with poignant images. Footprints take us through the seasons of life...and beyond. Terrific and awesome writing David.