Footfalls Of Antiquity Comments

They worked together from dawn to dusk Greeting every new dawn with fresher zeal Their hearts were securely fastened in love And had needs minimum and complaints nil..........the life of the past is so nicely inscribed here. It is a beautiful poem of past life having touching expression.10

Thank you Sylvia for your beautiful comment. Glad you tried to imbibe the essence of their life and spared so much of time to say how their life impacted you! Theirs was an inspiring saga of struggle and victory! I thought their life would be an inspiration to the new generation!

2) True mesmerizing and a most beautiful tribute.is created here, with much respect and great appreciations. What a time, these hard times of the grandparents. Respect and appreciations are the key-words here. Thank you for sharing this most valuable piece of the cultural-and historical tradition.

1) Wondrous youth marriage of three centuries ago, they stayed together until death did part them. I am amazed and think of this occurrence as a respectful and blessed festivity. I have heard and read so many stories, this is my prime time having read such a loveliest couple in full unawarness being wedded.

A great tribute to grand parents, a rarity of exemplary life once lived here in this holy land......Valsa.......so beautifully and touchingly scripted, I am speechless, no words left how to praise you.......you are great...10/10

it is a wonder to see how couples of older times lived amicably as a fable or a story and I think their sacrifice makes our life pleasant......the smooth flow of words in your poems is always appreciable...

A very well written saga of some lives well lived. Our parents stayed together through even the roughest of times. Money and food may have been scarce but love was not. God provided the means for survival. Hard work and perseverance was the two underlying forces that kept the roof over their childrens head. Well penned and a good read.

A lovely poetic story Valsa, describing the finer aspects of marriage and commitment.

Well wriitten for the poets` community while standing for a cause. The anecdote like description has a flavour and splendour befitting a GOOD WORK from your anvil...

Today and back few steps Love and affection has gone some where else, Hope in beauty parlor/In their twilight years, ambling the corridors of memory, They reminisced sweetly the joyful events of life and now out of parlor they arrange immediately when to come nice one 10

prof... thanx so much for such a beautiful poem that tells the story of love and sacrifice, , i can see how proud u as their grand daughter, , the 'Footfalls of Antiquity' fall so nostalgically on the path of a modern life and time, , this poem is one of your best, thanx

yes mam...those days were really bliss amidst all the toils that they put in....a very great write!

Valsa Ji, for narration, description, characterization, and versification...this is my........... Poem of the Day! ! !

Sounds lovely and grandparents rock, you can't beat them.

Valsa, a great lovely tribute to your grand parents! Yes. Our grand parents lives were simple and sweet though they toiled they were there for each other and- - In their twilight years ambling in the corridors of memory / They reminisced sweetly the joyful events of life - shows their togetherness! LOVED THE POEM, VALSA!

Poetess makes clarity in her writes we not dream love like, these ideal couple in that golden days ''Two streams that evenly and tranquilly ran side by side Never once been shattered on the rocks and shoals of life... may valsaji also dream own life with.. .....Smiling at their wavering progeny They retell the saga of their blissful life...... I love the likes

wonderfully you went to the paths of memory and reveal your love of your grand parents to the world...lovely and sweet is the diction of your poem, enjoyed fully...