Thursday, September 6, 2018

Footfalls Of An Impervious Lover Comments

Rating: 5.0

Fantastically large, the grass fed rills
winded lazily through a mountain pass,
row upon row of bright eyed daffodils
in luxuriant natural grandeur
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Kostas Lagos 06 September 2018

Well, this is a sensational poem! 10!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 September 2018

Fantastically large the grass fed rills swing when wind blows and this amazes mind. Sun's evening rays sprinkled on this give gentle feelings of golden appearance. Inside the cavern's cover hypnotic sleep dazzles. Mystical natural love is beautifully expressed in this excellent poem. A great imagery is drawn through perception...10

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Rini Shibu 06 September 2018

Beautiful imagery..enjoyed reading

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