Tuesday, July 31, 2018

Football Or Writing Comments

Rating: 5.0

Caught that
Long bomb
But I
Screwed up?
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Richard Wlodarski
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Richard Wlodarski 23 December 2022

THX, Dillip for validating this poem for my book by adding it to your favourites!

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Carl Roussell 02 August 2018

I am glad he took the writer's route. It seems that fame, whether in ball or words was difficult for him to accept. A 10.

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Richard Wlodarski 02 August 2018

Right on the money, Carl! On all accounts!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 August 2018

Such a very nice write, Richard...10+++

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Richard Wlodarski 12 August 2018

Thank you, Bernard!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2018

School is out for football and children are thinking. Bomb if caught it frightens mind. This provokes thought. Writing is nice when written from peaceful mind. An amazing sharing is done here...10

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Richard Wlodarski 31 July 2018

A fascinating interpretation of the poem, Kumarmani! Ironically, the long bomb (football pass) , in some ways, had scared Kerouac. He seemed afraid of his football fame.

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