Foot Steps of Spring.
Foot steps of Spring
Resounded in every flower
In the thick bowers of mango blossoms
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Spring is a topic that has been written about a lot- -but you have mafe it
writing- sorry cimputer is flipping me to other pages. This poem deserves poen of the day
I feel that I have stepped into a cool garden created by the beauty of your words. The wonder of spring reborn, yet timeless, grows quietly and lushly in this piece. I have stopped by here for a moment, and have been blessed by your poem. Thank you!
Thank you so much Neal for reading and giving your valuable feedback.
The SPRING springs as BHARAT KI NARI BHARATI NAYAK CREATIVITY BRINGS and sings
LOVELY Springing poetry by not Bharati but BHARAT KI NARI Bharti Nayak ji is
After spring came Winter, summer and rain Years have passed But time has not touched the maiden's heart She is still young In the sweet buzz And scents of spring. Lovely imagery, refreshing reading.
My humble thanks Annirudha Pathak ji for your kind read and liking my poems.
Her heart and body! ! ! Spring! With the fragrance of life and the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Moon waswriting letters to lily- - - - - - -] one of many lovely lines in this well-crafted poem! ! ! Bharati, I envy that talented pen of yours! ! ! Bees were humming Colorswere scattered Onbutterfly's wings.- - - - - - - - - - - - ] loveliness carried in the wings of words. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++
Thank you Susan Williams for your beautiful comment.As always your comments fill me with delight.
Beautiful flight of imagery has translated and interpreted the manifestations of the footsteps of spring along with it's magnanimous impact on the spring time life. Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Thank you Ratnakar Mandlik ji for kindly reading my poem and your valuable comment.Like day and night, the different seasons have their impact on our lives.We are part of the nature and so influened by natural forces.
A melodious poem to welcome the spring. How can one remain aloof without being touched by this change? A thoughtful poem. Loved it 100++
We hear beautiful song of spring watching seasonal blooming of flowers. Seasonal fragrance of spring we inhale. We hear the footstep sound of spring that pleases us. An excellent imagery is drawn in this beautiful natural poem. Spring is favourable for all creatures....10
Thank you Sri Kumarmani Mahakul for your valuable comment.Spring is a favourable season for all creatures as there is no harshness of nature during that time and Spring is associated with love, color and music.
made it novel fresh a siren song of spring and a young maiden. Perfect 10+++++++++++++++++++++ and onto fav list!