Saturday, January 26, 2019

Foot Steps Of Spring. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Foot Steps of Spring.
Foot steps of Spring
Resounded in every flower
In the thick bowers of mango blossoms
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Bharati Nayak
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Susan Williams 09 March 2019

made it novel fresh a siren song of spring and a young maiden. Perfect 10+++++++++++++++++++++ and onto fav list!

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Susan Williams 09 March 2019

Spring is a topic that has been written about a lot- -but you have mafe it

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Susan Williams 09 March 2019

writing- sorry cimputer is flipping me to other pages. This poem deserves poen of the day

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Susan Williams 09 March 2019

Entirely beautiful and poignant. This is marvelous wri

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Seamus O Brian 01 February 2019

I feel that I have stepped into a cool garden created by the beauty of your words. The wonder of spring reborn, yet timeless, grows quietly and lushly in this piece. I have stopped by here for a moment, and have been blessed by your poem. Thank you!

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Bharati Nayak 03 February 2019

Thank you so much Neal for reading and giving your valuable feedback.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 February 2019

add on 100000000000000++++++++++++++++++ plus my vote

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Bharati Nayak 01 February 2019

Thank you Poet Poet for your comments and valuable 10s.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 February 2019

The SPRING springs as BHARAT KI NARI BHARATI NAYAK CREATIVITY BRINGS and sings

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 February 2019

LOVELY Springing poetry by not Bharati but BHARAT KI NARI Bharti Nayak ji is

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 January 2019

After spring came Winter, summer and rain Years have passed But time has not touched the maiden's heart She is still young In the sweet buzz And scents of spring. Lovely imagery, refreshing reading.

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Bharati Nayak 30 January 2019

My humble thanks Annirudha Pathak ji for your kind read and liking my poems.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 January 2019

Her heart and body! ! ! Spring! With the fragrance of life and the romance of nature. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bharati Nayak 30 January 2019

Thank you Edward Kofi Louis for your appreciation.

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Susan Williams 28 January 2019

Moon waswriting letters to lily- - - - - - -] one of many lovely lines in this well-crafted poem! ! ! Bharati, I envy that talented pen of yours! ! ! Bees were humming Colorswere scattered Onbutterfly's wings.- - - - - - - - - - - - ] loveliness carried in the wings of words. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++

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Bharati Nayak 28 January 2019

Thank you Susan Williams for your beautiful comment.As always your comments fill me with delight.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 26 January 2019

Beautiful flight of imagery has translated and interpreted the manifestations of the footsteps of spring along with it's magnanimous impact on the spring time life. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Bharati Nayak 27 January 2019

Thank you Ratnakar Mandlik ji for kindly reading my poem and your valuable comment.Like day and night, the different seasons have their impact on our lives.We are part of the nature and so influened by natural forces.

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2019

A melodious poem to welcome the spring. How can one remain aloof without being touched by this change? A thoughtful poem. Loved it 100++

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Bharati Nayak 28 January 2019

Thank you Mohammed Asim Nehal for your precious comment.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 January 2019

We hear beautiful song of spring watching seasonal blooming of flowers. Seasonal fragrance of spring we inhale. We hear the footstep sound of spring that pleases us. An excellent imagery is drawn in this beautiful natural poem. Spring is favourable for all creatures....10

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Bharati Nayak 28 January 2019

Thank you Sri Kumarmani Mahakul for your valuable comment.Spring is a favourable season for all creatures as there is no harshness of nature during that time and Spring is associated with love, color and music.

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