Thursday, November 19, 2009

Foot Soldier Comments

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I inspire this Fire,
To all those who see,
My Effort and Desire;
For the Love of being Free.
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Daniela X. Daraz
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I feel it busting out the seams, but I think some of the wording can be tweaked to allow more to flow out freely. A poem of solitude hurts the most when its unrestricted in my opinion. But there is no absence of power and cause.... Inspiring.

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