Foot-Prints Comments

By my Running FOOT-PRINTS, the poem my hand failed to write to your false paper....loved these lines...It's quality of artistry is profound! thanks for sharing, Nurul... +++++10

Behind the mountain with your mind! However, weapons of war made by mankind WILL NEVER BRING US PEACE. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

are bomb craters.........footprints? i liked the lines which mentioned running and mentioned the poem engraved by them. bri :)

• WHEN I LOOKED for definition of “allution” [from your Poet’s Note], I found this. See the spelling. This is a new word for me. follow Dictionary.com allusion [uh-loo-zhuh n] • Examples • Word Origin See more synonyms on Thesaurus.com noun 1. a passing or casual reference; an incidental mention of something, either directly or by implication: The novel's title is an allusion to Shakespeare. 2. the act of alluding; the making of a casual or indirect reference to something: The Bible is a fertile source of allusion in art. 3. Obsolete. a metaphor or parable. Origin of allusion Some other observations on your Foot-Prints poem: I am rereading the poem now. It is more understandable (for ME) after reading the poet’s note. Thanks. “I try to look up the sky” …………..i would add “to” or “at” after “up”. But if I were about to look for a word in a dictionary, I might say: “I am looking up how to spell a word.’ I might say “I am looking up the street ………or up the woman’s dress………or up above my head, but I would not say “I am looking up the sky “ …. Or “up the tree” [well, maybe]….or “up the car” [unless I meant that e.g. I was looking up information about a car]. But I might say “looking up the pipe”. LANGUAGE IS WAY TOO COMPLICATED! ! ! ! ! I was taught the story of The Garden of Eden (not Eaden) . “To have a ariel look….” …………I would use “an”, not “a” in front of “ariel” …………..and here we spell it “aerial”. [well, I didn’t really know how to spell it! ] Maybe in India, U.K. etc. it is spelled “ariel”. follow Dictionary.com aerial [adjective air-ee-uh l, ey-eer-ee-uh l; noun air-ee-uh l] • Examples • Word Origin See more synonyms on Thesaurus.com adjective 1. of, in, or produced by the air: aerial currents. 2. inhabiting or frequenting the air: aerial creatures. 3. operating on a track or cable elevated above the ground: an aerial ski lift up the mountainside. 4. reaching far into the air; high; lofty: aerial spires. 5. partaking of the nature of air; airy. 6. unsubstantial; visionary: aerial fancies. 7. having a light and graceful beauty; ethereal: aerial music. noun 11. a radio or television antenna. 12. Football. forward pass. This story is a bit surrealistic*** for me. ***not sure if “surrealistic” is quite the word I want. Full Definition of surrealistic 1. 1: of or relating to surrealism 2. 2: having a strange dreamlike atmosphere or quality like that of a surrealist painting I like the poem, though I like, even better, poems I don’t have to wonder much about. The video I think caused me to have to deal with an ad video which came on after your video. And sometimes when a poem has a video, I find the page switches to another poem page when the video finishes. Both the video and the still photo make me think you are trying to make some statement about war, as I believe your “subject (of poem) ” line mentioned. Yes, it mentioned “art, terrorism, warfare”.

inner awakening is needed for all, to some it happens by incidents, to so some it happens naturally, to some it was not realized at all, your thoughts are spontaneous and superfluous, the more you open your heart, the fountain gushes priceless words, keep sharing, thanks for the invitation, read my works too, dear

Run run and run and I run blindly...but. That mortal tragedy brought me the fortune to Enter into the Eden, the God's evergreen Garden.... Salvation from the worldly affairs....but not this way, not this way..Life is beautiful and these fanatics should learn to respect life... Some poems need no paper as it is engraved in the timeline of nature. Beautiful poem Nurul. Keep sharing your thoughts.10

Beautiful write by ingenuity of thought, thanks for sharing