Foolish Me(Sonnet) Comments

You are young, you still have a long way to go. I went through real bombings, starvation, and dead bodies around me, however you are writing like we all do, writing about what goes on in our mind. When you learn what you say it comes back to you, you will understand more of the world. When I was 20 years old, I was a shy dummy, could not write poems like you do. You are doing well. Keep on writing, but, please tell it if it is a dream or true. For me it is sad, that your mind thinks of those things, and not funny.

again a nice and funny poem... Really good...10++ aditi

Wonderful piece of writting man... Nice one.. Excellent..!

great job :) keep going

Your first line indicates you are awake, the last but 1 says it was a dream. You made us believe it is not a dream until the end said otherwise. You then make us wonder what next. A good poem ends not but continues in the mind. This is a good poem.

really nice...i really like it, combination of emotion *& humour, really nice keep writing..