Foolish Heartbeat Comments

I love this poem. You portray your loves longing so well with this beautifully written piece.10 from me.

wonderful composition shared here Ariel....sorry it took me awhile to read your stunning poetry.....Love it!

Very Nice, Ariel... The Day Is Gone, Leaving Scattered Emblems... Brilliant Line! and then you go on to show all the little things that was observed for the day and how life settles in continuing on in each heartbeat of hope... I Enjoyed the Read... MoonBee

really wonderful... nice thoughts... love can conquer all distance can never hinder if heart beats for it... may it be a foolish heartbeat...its Love... 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

Con la moral corregimos los errores de nuestros instintos y con el amor corregimos los errores de nuestra moral.

a very beautiful poem

beautiful.............

Hi, seems you refer this to a cyber heart desire. At times I feel tthe same, no wonder we are poets! Nice!

A real good poem, a joy to read.

I can well relate to this... Its beautiful how you put it 'listened to your heartbeat from a thousand miles Heared your laughter every time you smile... Thanks for sharing

Its wasn't so bad to be foolish sometime, another great write thank you dear Kapatid.

awww, thats a power of love...thanks for sharing.