Monday, September 7, 2015

Foolish Heart (Triolet) Comments

Rating: 4.8

Fair love what do you want with my poor heart
Have you come to taunt and play with me
To lead me on then quickly to depart
Fair love what do you want with my poor heart
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David Wood
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Howard Mcdougal 07 September 2015

A fun piece to read filled with emotions

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Rahman Henry 07 September 2015

It's a wonder. Lovely poem. I would like to translate it into my Native language (Bengali) for the poetry lovers in Bengali. I'll try my best to maintain your rhyme in translation. Best wisheS

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David Wood 07 September 2015

Please do translate into Bengali my first 50 sonnets are similar.

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M Asim Nehal 07 September 2015

Fair Heart............please reply.......what do you want from my poet friend............Awesome poem my friend.10+++

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