Foolish Girl Comments

nice poem..........

I have 2 say WOW! ! I can relate 2 your pain in your writing, you should check out my Pain poem, I think you would like it, and be able to understand it! ! xoxoxoxo- Jen, Jennifer, or Just Me

very interesting piece to say the lest I love how you drawed me into your poem.

Beautiful composition, one who can understand- s/he is no more foolish. 10+++

atta girl...way to go! I've forgiven myself and i'm trying to move on you said it...we all are the devils workshop sometime... an redemption is there for the taking....you are courageous and angelic for the force of conviction you display in the poem thanx for the share tc cheers

Wise poem...............from the wisest gurl..........God bless you.............

foolish? ... not at all, more so, mislead, and confused...but no one is expected to be perfect, you make foolish decisions then you look back, and learn from them, which makes you a stronger and better person. nicely done, you are a very good writer.

oh my my. i am soo moved. because this is so deep. i know how this feels even thought i'm not a girl. but this is so wonderful. i can't stop crying. i will give you a A+. keep up the good work young one.

WOW That's all I can say...I was nearly brought to tears. You're good...Great...The best I've read. Keep it up.

This is a very deep poem as if it were a life experience. I think many people could learn from this poem. Keep up the good work.

Wow, that had some style and flow 2 it home grl...some strong feeling as well. Peace, Hippy Sav

In the hospital legs spread open tears running down I feel the baby scramble and die from the needle that peirced it's infant heart Two spirits so close together yet so many worlds apart is it ur first person account? the fire of repentance cleanse all god bless u

DLG: This is one of the most moving powerful poems that I have read. It takes tremendous courage to put your story out there like this. I am only hoping that many will benefit from it. I wish you the best in everything. I don't know what else to say. 10+

Third poem of yours that i have read. By far, the most powerful. You have courage. Thank you for allowing us into your most deeply felt emotions. You truly are courageous. One Thing, Daddy's Little Girl. No one owns you. You owe nothing to anyone. Nothing. All you owe is to yourself. Only you own yourself. Period. A.

wow. well done. very powerful. everything you have said was very true. hopefully you showed people to think before doing or they could end up having a life like that.

i am against abprtion too but i think that your poem is really well written. good job

i am very much against abortion. youre poem was good, but i dont agree with your standards and reasons. i did like how you wrote it though, how emotional it is.

Great write! ! the emotions in this poem are overwhelming. Well done

well written emotion is one thing many poets have a hard time putting into their poetry but u nailed it well done

this poem is so fulled with emotion and sadness.. 'Two spirits so close together yet so many worlds apart' thats a great line.. good job on this one =)