Saturday, May 7, 2005

Fooling Comments

Rating: 5.0

I said
'You remember the time
you fooled me
into kissing the fat girl.
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James Mills
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Poetry Hound 07 May 2005

Yes, cryptic indeed. I like it. Simple and funny.

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Andy Konisberg 07 May 2005

a bit cryptic this one James...by that, I mean that I was unsure what to make of the ending. perhaps, you fooled me! I'll read all your other poems and send you an e-mail.

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