Thursday, July 21, 2011

Fooled By Jealous Lies Comments

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You don’t see my smile
Its been hidden for so long
I feel like your words are my trial
Coz my innocence is so long gone
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Rebecca Pepper
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Daniel Laurence 21 July 2011

I like this poem very much. Its in the form of a story of your emotions and trials of you life and i love the way you portray it. very well done Dan

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