Monday, July 2, 2018

Fool's Gold Comments

Rating: 5.0

In searching for some valuables untold
Your find sometimes is a fabulous fool's gold.

Who is the fool: who hid or who retrieved?
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Oleg Vorobyov
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Mahtab Bangalee 02 July 2018

wonderful every couplet- goodly penned and good poem like to quote one of couples Like humble deeds which never resonate, Like deeper feelings never to abate!

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Oleg Vorobyov 02 July 2018

Sincerest thanks for likking the piece! Well-penned when your heart is intoned by true understanding of the matter. I composed it just a week ago hesitating to promulgate, now I see that I have hit the bull's eye!

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Practicing Poetess 02 July 2018

This is a veritable GEM of a poem! No Fool's Gold here! :)

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Oleg Vorobyov 02 July 2018

Thanks, dear sharer! I grant this gem to everyone who really wishes to see the truth, not vain dazzle!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 02 July 2018

Oleg, such an outstanding write๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Oleg Vorobyov 02 July 2018

Thanx for encouraging and appreciation!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 July 2018

Like modest hearts, yet ready to enthuse. Humble deed motivates others not the gold. An amazing writing is shared with wonderful rhyming thin this poem...10

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