Fool In Love Comments
Its getting harder to breathe,
My sights blurring, my eyes deceive,
My mind is blank, I can’t think,
When she’s around I can’t even blink.
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Don't call yourself a fool! You aren't. People get shy about telling somebody you love them. And I am ALSO one of them. I am young, I know. But I also love someone too. This was a great way to express your inner feelings. I never thought I'd tell someone that even though I am young I have a crush, but your poem kinda sorta thought me not to keep things bottled up. Keep writing these great poems! God Bless All Poets. *Lilly*
Nicely written I must say, expressing your feelings well. I like the third stanza the most.
Why call yourself a fool? Love is free, has wings...let what you want go. If you love her, would you love her inside a cage? I don't have these thoughts unless a poem brings them out...yours did! You write very well, indeed! ! xxElysabeth
looks like you're really inlove while writing this one! ! great poem..
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7/27/2025 4:53:11 PM # 1.0.0
very cute poem. i love it. good job.