Wednesday, April 4, 2018

Fool From The Heart Comments

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I am now reaching towards fort eight
Pretty old lady now
Yet look at my fate
I am still a kid at any rate.
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Rimni chakravarty
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Unnikrishnan E S 05 April 2018

Hi Rimni, A very serious poem, where the poet looks inward in her heart, delves into her past. She takes stock of her life. Your own words: I am still a kid at any rate. The childishness, bachapah remains with everybody. The degree varies with each. Very thoroughly expressed the feelings of the heart. Leaves a in the heart of the reader. Nicely done.

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