Friday, July 12, 2019

Fool For You Comments

Rating: 4.9

God Said
You are a fool
You can't
Save the world
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Lyn Paul
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Khairul Ahsan 11 October 2019

'Soon - You hope not Peacefully You hope' - yes, exactly so! Thanks for sharing this nice poem. If could explain a bit, as to how this picture is related to your poem!

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Bri Edwards 29 September 2019

i don't recall God saying any of that. Hmm? i'll have to ask Her about it next time we 'lunch' together. bri :)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 July 2019

Time is passing The air is changing The world Won't stop For You.....outstanding conceptualization. Time will not wait us and so we have to do accordingly unless we will be fool. A brilliant poem is astutely delineated.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 July 2019

All know aussies r good poets and you add to their wealth do read my poem MOM'S SMILES you will love it BUT PROMISE NOT TO CRY as many do ma'am I have many aussie poets as friends

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Edward Kofi Louis 17 July 2019

Foolish People cannot Save the World! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Tony Karas 15 July 2019

You are no fool. Well done. Hugs.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 July 2019

You Must Care For You Your own world.......touching expression! A pragmatic write......................10

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Jane Campion 13 July 2019

An imaginative and we'll written poem.

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