The juxtapostion of two opposite expressions is amazing, , , with a touch humour here, , ,10s
A hard hit upon the one who tries to make you a fool
O.o! WOW...that's really really...COOL! my gosh! the impact of your poem is really really strong! i can really feel it! brilliant! try out another poem of mine, 'Love, that's what we're looking for'..seriously...i would give u a standing ovation for this.. (applause~~)
a good couplet...sending strong message by bringing oneself into it..