Monday, November 4, 2019

Food Water And Love Comments

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And what life needs I just desire only a little eatable
And why I breathe just to pay thanks for water drinkable
And what for I sleep just to dream a beautiful lovable!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 November 2019

A poem that conveys gratefulness and contentment. Yes, we should aspire only to those things we need that can sustain life, happiness and contentment. Anything in excess is greediness. Aquisition of excessive material wealth will jeopardize other individuals. A brilliant poem with a meaningful message.

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An poem with beautiful lines, thank you sir

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Khalida Bano Ali 04 November 2019

A great thought nicely penned/

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 November 2019

lovable kissable and disable makes this poem URDU worthy HONORABLE Sonnetable wow also Shakeppearable BUT A WOWAN MUST BE ENDEARABLE SEXABLE

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