Sunday, July 5, 2020

Food! Glorious Food! The Chinese Takeaway. Comments

Rating: 5.0

The good old Chinese takeaway,
Is such a heavenly British treat.
So varied on what is offered,
To then select and happily eat.
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Shaun Cronick
COMMENTS
Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 July 2020

A one of a kind unique poem crafted by a versatile and brilliant mind. Beautifully crafted and well presented. Very entertaining too.Loved reading it. Onto my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 July 2020

Wow, what a fascinating poem. Now, I want that prawn cooked in so many ways! ! We cannot go to Chinese buffet yet. One of these days, I have to satisfy this crave. This poem ignited me to eat...eat....eat.. Liked your final stanza. A great warning to everyone who is lured to order and order food whenever they want.

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Shaun Cronick 05 July 2020

Typo's amended and the second stanza's second ending of line should be the words on line. It has been amended but it takes a while to register unfortunately.

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Dominic Windram 05 July 2020

Great poem Shaun...I ordered a Chinese takeway the other night...spare ribs, chips, egg fried rice and King prawn with green pepper and black bean sauce...delicious. It's a a titillating tastebuds 10 from me!

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