Is it really so depraving
I like to eat a lot?
The thought of food I’m craving
Just ties me in a knot
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'Is it really so depraving I like to eat a lot? The thought of food I’m craving Just ties me in a knot' sound like my eldest daughter, loves food, quick with humour, smiles a lot, and if thoughts were food she would never stop thinking :)
You have some very good thoughts here. Congratulations on having this chosen as poem of the day. I see you haven't submitted anything since 15 October 2012. I hope you are still with us and healthy at age 89. My favorite lines are the first two. That's exactly how I feel: Is it really so depraving I like to eat a lot?
Wonderful thoughts. Very unique, same time appealing. Beautifully knitted poem on a common theme, yet with a difference. Thoroughly enjoyed. X
So many of our fellow man We’ve often fought and killed That started when the world began And too much blood we’ve spilled
In hope the Gods would heed; but, they did not. Thanks for sharing.
humor on the dagger's point going deep into the heart yet a smile a wonderful poem
A most enjoyable poem, an unusual subject but you've worked it well: -)
this poem is to good and you have solve my prolbum