Saturday, August 22, 2009

Food For Thought... Comments

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If, on this night so dark and dreary
You find yourself depressed and weary
And contemplate the various ways
That you might end it all...
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Dee Daffodil
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 20 June 2014

Aweinspiring poem with a great message, against suicidal tendencies. Fab rhyming. Pls review my latest poem too.

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Chuck Audette 15 September 2009

Kudos for this message, humanely and rhythmically stated. -chuck

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Zen Bojczuk 26 August 2009

Wondeful poem Dee. Full of passion and heartfelt sympathy...and pain. Zen

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HaZeM PaKKaR 22 August 2009

thank you so much! ! i was really in a deep need to read such a supporting poem.. it has been added to MyPoemList.. nice & well written.. thanks again! !

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