O Food, your glory is so great,
Strength of limbs you generate.
It should be of our own choice,
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A surprising, nourishing song of praise. Your comment on my poem, Brothers, made my day. Thank you for writing.
What a brilliant journey into the world of food! from a brilliant mind sir! regards Bob
It should be of our own choice, ......... Nicely written Sir
So well said Sir. It is said that 'annam Para Brahma swaroopam' A great poem indeed.10
Hello again CP and what a delightful and tasty tribute to the bounty of God's world. Loyd
A wonderful poem and providing so much food for thought. Best wishes, Andrew
Hi dear friend. I thought my knees were bearing my stomach, but I was wrong, the truth is the stomach is bearing them. What a delicious poem!
great piece...great concept... very educational the beauty of nature and what the nature gives to us... the food that is responsible of our continues living... and it would lead us to think where the food came from..from God... and His words are our food too..food for our soul.... 10++++
It was a delightful pleasure to read this imaginatively phrased and written poem, C. P. Poets, of course, write on many topics, the most common seems to be love and the second most common seems to be death. Few ever write about food, the single most vital factor in human existence! If there were no food, there would obviously be no people or animals or birds. You took such an overlooked subject and wrote a charming and quite interesting poem about it. Carl.
You're NO GOOD, for a diet, Mr. Sharma, but i must confess that this poem does smack of a savory offering, indeed! Your choice in employing couplet stanzaec structure...works well, here...BTW: Are couplets very caloic? ...LOL! F j R 2009
great theme..well written.. a food for thought..the number one every living things needs....
I really do like this write, C P. but then, I've always had a great affinity for food. A well penned tribute to one of lifes greatest necessities, my friend. Best wishes to you and yours....A...10 Richard
A song of praise for food how it affects man and animals.......food in its riches and sources...beautifully written..10/10
wow.....such a lovely poem....sometimes we forget to respect our food....from now on, I will thank god for the food before eating. great, sir 10
The juices of watery food fresh, Dissolve all superfluous flesh. awesome write afterall inspirations from the Rig Veda -10 anjali
a lovely poem on food it gave me an appetite..how true each creature is so designed to nurture itself...10
Yes I really love this poem I really love food