Monday, February 23, 2009

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Lines on the table, heart aching.
offers ringing in my ear.
Guys telling me what i wanna hear,
feeling on my leg, lifting up my skirt
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Ju5t m3 Kay
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Nangula Immanuel 25 August 2009

WoW! i love this piece, it's like a play, a story. Easy to follow! The emptiness protrayed by the 'character' is so clear to see. Really great poem! : -)

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it's sooo not oh well... they got what they deserved at the end as you and i both know... so bump them..... live...move on.... remember..... let go&let god girl... he and I both got ya back....

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Joya Feghaly 19 March 2009

hihi lovely poem! ! ! ! keep on writting! !

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Ray Mesa 06 March 2009

I despise the illogical format you have, but this one was actually really well played out. I have a sense of what this portion of you life is like.

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MuRdA RhEE 26 February 2009

WoW lol I Love dis writting you did... You Like To Keep It Hood lol 10***

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VEER the ultimate boy 23 February 2009

really dear what can i say about this poem of yours.........its really a poem that a proffessiona poet cant write......when i read the poem i just thought that i was seeing a play really you have the ability to write more and more poem keep it up friend thanks

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ObamaSaidKnockYouOut ! 23 February 2009

Wow! Dats deep. Kudos

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