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You have taken poetry form to a whole knew concept. Well done. Brilliant and creative.

Hey! very nice poem, i like the drawing but found it kinda hard to read at times but must say it was worth it, al in all really good

wow! beautiful! ! and very original

Amazing piece of art... I can't say just poetry :) Very beautiful, and colorful. Both in word and in image. A 10 from me!

This poem is beautiful. There's so much feeling expressed in the words, and creativity put into detail. Beautiful.

Ah yes, Geovanni. Since you've requested my opinion upon reading my own poetry, I reply. Be sure to read my bio and take note the format that I keep as styled to my own personal expression. Also realize that you've many readers of age groups, female, male and less appreciating of your sincerity and time consuming efforts. The following is how I've reacted, my being 82 next month and as you can read, some if my own endeavors were recollections of 'being in love' from age 15 and still inspired. Love, being within or without, immortal and Omni present I would like to see these words arranged as stanzas. More easily read and sort of lyrically felt. Some poetic deviation allowed, of spelling or word group may express some individuality of your own. Keep in mind, that you express your feelings of which the graphic artist within also, quite heartedly, wishes to be seen. In a visual and audible way, one expression upstages the other. Had you read this poem to your lover without the artistry, then what would be her sincere, felt reaction? I've yet to see any of the great classics of ancient and contemporary poetry, be of such collaboration of word grouped artistry of expression. Nope! I'm not the one to rate a 1-10 predicated on values. My own lovers reaction would not be expected with such inappropriate request. When, I've time, I will read some of the many others that were noticed on your list. louie levy poet browse search the above 3 words only as they appear for more of my sharing. Keep writing, for your 'self, all ways. you've no better critic See my poem 'Critique and Prejudice' here on PH. ...louie

you are a double artist here...a word pictographer and a picture maker...your talent cannot be matched....the figures, title, colours, content arrangement all seem to be wonderful...the creativity gives pleasure to the creator as well as the reader....refreshing and stunning...

great poem - love the way it's displayed. great work!

yo this is tight work....i bet it took all day..but was worth the effort....keep doing what you do man...

this is a great poem so deep and full of feeling! ! ! i love it

That is really sweet and very well set out. It must have taken plenty of time to write it and set it out but I think it was worth it.

wow! That's something else...I really loved it...pretty spectacular and pretty and spectacular(oh I'm repeating myself) ...the swans of love forming the heart of the matter...so damned clever. cool...real cool...my eye is still tripping out on it and it has burnt onto my eye like an after-image. love Donall Donall

Oh what a beauty by the twin swans love when respires inbetween by the colors mihght be flinting from the rainbow by the moon night when imbecile when besotted by the blue................unique curvature of love by the art out of words, love seems to fledges by the twins, really unique art, the poetry and art when entwined,10+, thanks for sharing

AWESOME! ! ! I totally loved it. I think it was very romanic. The swans were a good idea, I thought that it was vry cute. Great Job. I would give it 11 but we can not go that high so sorry. Sophia

Hi Geovanni, I love this poem at first it was extremly confussing but when i read it a secend time it was less so and i understood it. I gave it a TEN! ! I can see the heart with a face. I know that it is about love. Nat.

nicely done, i can see a picture kissing each other or a swan? but i don't get the words to dots the meaning or what you are to tell about? i got dizzy to get it, sorry 'kabayan' can you make it clear enough, maybe i dont get the technology or an ignorance to it.

it was really hard to read but i got the message. one of the better poems i've read. good job,

WOW! ! ! ! ! ! ! that was amazing, alittle hard 2 read though. but i like the way u used the words 2 make a pic. Nicely done. hope that girl likes it. i give it a 10/10

AWW! I REALY ENJOYED IT! ! NICE WORK! ! ! !

I did not know there was such a thing as swantification until now... Geovanni Leaño you dress to impress! ! ! !