Font Color=orange(More Like A Story) It's True, And A Bit Long Comments

your poem is a fantastic write....its simply breath taking! great work....i dont have words...keep it up!

Yeah, it's so long.... but still it good how many times that you need to write it?

hey girl, i have been there its really hard to write about, but its so poweful it just pulls you in and wont let you out. im glad you made it. i adore this poem

This is a very powerful poem with alot of emotion. The way you describe this situation is stunning and makes the reader feel remorse that you were put in that position. A great poem

Another extraordinaire love strory! !

It was with a psyciscal since of detachment in looking down into the words instead flowing with them that I read these slow paced lines..to use the gun...on my self or the other..what did not happen that should have...what should not have happened that did..and in the end knowing...the beginning..will forever flow..like you...onto the raft of regret...iip

honestly speaking, at first sight I said to myself I would read a few lines but just as I read the first two lines I changed my mind.your poem is shockingly pathetic, full of emotions, pains, pleasures, it is a mixture of good and bad things, a swaying piece you become lost whilst in reading, very tender poem.

WOW! It takes a lot of strength to survive something like that and even more guts to put your emotions out there for the world to see. I am real proud of you! very beautiful poem! !

i could sense the confusion at that moment i could feel the sorrow i could see the red color good poem~

You bring the true meaning in not judging a book by it's cover karman... very couragous indeed you are. thanks for sharing. (hey, I guess we can talk, if you'd still like) but don't expect me to be nice. anywho, 10 from me deary