Font Color='#ff00ff''To My Friend April'/Font Comments

Geovanni... This is so Yay! .... Tis been ages since I visited your quirk on cleverness, aroha, Deana

cleverly construcred concrete poetry I aplaud your ingenuity

Waah! Swerte ni april friend kanya. Nice poem! keep it up!

This is great. I love the way you have arranged the text. It does make it a bit difficult to read, but that doesn't matter. It helps the reader to concentrate on the words and the meaning. Well done!

Art work and words married, a excellent show of creativity, gave it a 10

Very interesting style but difficult to read. Good idea anyway, keep posting.

I see that you have a unique style of writing. I did find it a bit hard to follow seeing that you put it in a shape of a person. I would have never thought of that. I like it. It is well written. I look forward to reading more of your poems

nice one an unusual style though...

very good poem. I like the way it's typed. Also, it's very pure.

thats so nice! keep writing!

Amazing. No other word places it better... So then, I rate it a ten! Good show amigo!

Aww. Thats amazing! Thanks for directing me to it. =]

This is more than poetry. It is literally a work of art. To put a poem in this form is brilliance. I love it.

Very nice poem you have here. Very creative!

this is a cool poem and the fact that it is shaped like a person is awesome! ! ! !

i like it! ! ! i got lost a few times but i like it

Awh, that is unique and fun! Great job on the poem and the form in which it appears...Best wishes, ~Kristy~

Interestingly and in an original way …

Dear friend, that is simply wonderful Art of love as when curved by the words from the heart when burning brilliant by the passion rocked by blue................really fantastic curvature of inner swing,10/10, thanks for sharing

i read some comments that said you over did it with the lines....yea i dont think so...its perfect the way it is..awesome words and creative appearance everything poetry should be