Thursday, June 11, 2009

Font Color=darkvioletskates (School Assignment 8th) Comments

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The ice is smooth, smooth, smooth.
I glimpse it out my window,
the clam water, frozen solid.
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Jane Meyer
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HaZeM PaKKaR 17 August 2009

this is a very well written scenario / portrait.. '' I spin and twirl and jump, feel that wonderful sensation '' while reading this.. i really adore this piece.. it makes me in love with skating.. & the last verse is a great advice: '' So for now, I’ll live in the moment, floating over the ice, just me and my skates '' i feel it right now / here! !

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