Thursday, July 9, 2009

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He takes my hand,
and wraps it in his.
“It’s so cold! ” he exclaims.
“Why is that? ' he asks.
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Jane Meyer
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HaZeM PaKKaR 22 August 2009

wonderful short story.. it has been added to MyPoemList! !

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~ Jon London ~ 14 July 2009

Jane, this touches....the voice of love now empty of feeling....the spirit that contains the inner smile....no longer warms the heart with the light of love for the other....very well composed piece my lovely.....you continue to grow with each new piece my friend....your works are a true reminder of your natural talent...keep penning

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