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Taken from a ripened fruit
then given all that it could need
safe from those who’d like the loot
of such a precious seed.
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Jane Meyer
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HaZeM PaKKaR 23 March 2010

***Allah*** Few words could tell so much.. I am surrprised how a 16-year-old girl could reach the bottom of a hidden treasure like this.. you simply have added something precious to my experience.. Also, this reminds me of a novel of ''Siddhartha'' by ''Hermann Hesse'' which deals with the spiritual journey of a boy known as Siddhartha from the Indian Subcontinent during the time of the Buddha. Acutally, you could write an ''allegorical'' poem which teaches a lesson through symbolism.

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