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Not sure why you say WIP. Estuary is spelled wrong. Why should th number 17 mean anything in English, especially at the sacrifice of sense, leaving out 'at' bef 3 a. m. But these are very satisfying and some are very good. When my syllables burst the box and become poems I just call em 'high coos'.
This a very excellent poem you wrote. It shows what a man see in the environment.
Splendid work... it depict day to day interaction of man with the environment! Lots of lessons learned from these kinds of poetry. Great job Nomi! A 10.
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7/18/2025 3:55:48 PM # 1.0.0
your haikus are great. i've only written one. 'Blooming Gloom'. its okay. keep writing! !