... Font Color= Blue Love Versus Hate.... (Final Count Down) Comments

This is one of the best poems I have ever read.

The images in these verses are strong, just like the subjects they depict! Nice poem.

Eyan, this is an outstanding poem, yeah, love versus hate is a very good topic on poetry. nice...

This was an amazing poem...I absolutely loved it. The way you described love and hate...awesome.

Excellent work. It flow nicely and deserve no less than->> 10

wow nice! i felt every verses... but hope the love always reign. have a wonderful yuletide season... bring out the love.

excellent simile Innocent like a dove Are the wings of love. excellent abstract poem 10++++++++++

I found this poem different everytime I read it four times to be precise. I didn't find repetition, quite the opposite in fact an old piece for the present time. Regards. Craig.

this is absolutely amazing. i haven't read something this good in a long time. you don't have to write modernly for the modern to understand you. but the words you use make it seem like an ancient prophecy being uncovered and shown to the world. a warning to the innocent from a man called hate.10! ! !

sir. you just made sperm a bad thing. :) . The poem is good.

I think the repetition is much like a stripping away. The peeling away from that which had one time appealed. Interesting poem none the lest. I see nothing festive about it. Nor a completion of the act of removal either.

Eighteen comments is enough. I never got eighteen comments.

Eyan, you cover all the bases of love and hate in your poem. I enjoyed the write and look forward to more great writing from you. Keep up the good work. Your Friend Lynn

Jocund and thro’ and thro’ the heart …enjoyed…giving highest marks ten.. Ms. Nivedita UK

you bring in your poem the Christmas message bright in its true sense in your original style...good work...10

I like the personification; how love becomes hates enemy and not its opposite and how hate is depicted as frustration and agony more than unwillingness.

great poem very interesting

Nice one. (: Very enjoyable.

Hi Eyan - The battle of 'Good v Evil' is perrennial. It is a Friut of the Spirit LOVE combatting a Work of the Flesh HATE. This is a daily battle in every human psyche. Every Human has FREE WILL - We can let God's Holy Spirit of LOVE subjugate HATRED and LOVE can reign in our Hearts. V 1 Describes HATE and V 2 describes LOVE. V 3 We can't blame the Environment or Satan we can (with God's assistance) be 'Masters of our own Destiny' and chose LOVE rather than HATE. Nicely structured and worded poem. Your in Poetry - JOHN.

beautiful narration of the neverending battle........ truly great