Tuesday, November 10, 2009

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Painting beautiful words
On an ugly portrait
Does not make the dust
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Eyan Desir
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Janell Cressman 18 December 2009

it's about time someone said something about that subject, really good poem, i totally agree with Kranthi, what he said said is soo true, thanks for sharing, it was a pleasure to read! ! ! ! (10)

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Sharnae Green 17 December 2009

the realist ive read yet

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Ray Telcy 26 November 2009

my fav, i really like this

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Nikunj Sharma 19 November 2009

Couldn't agree more...its a great poem.....keep it up

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Kranthi Pothineni 19 November 2009

Once I had read and recorded it in my handbook...'I can't judge any of you. I have no malice against you and no ribbons for you. But I think that it is high time that you all start looking at yourselves, and judging the lie that you live in.'

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cheyenne briggs 17 November 2009

wow...that is so true..i likes it...i thought it was funny..thanks for sharing

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Nic Leisure 17 November 2009

it's true great job to this poem....keep up the good work

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Luwi Habte 17 November 2009

well, as a poem this is so nice as an idea..i don't like it... am not going to talk more, cuz we have talked abt this a lot through private aren`t we? so keep on writing..but not blaming.. cuz i know you are the greatest poet not a... nice poem actually luwi

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Rajaram Ramachandran 16 November 2009

Some are born critics and they don't know how to appreciate other's good work. They count holes rather than taking the good aspects in each work. A very good poem you have written here.

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Merna Ibrahim 16 November 2009

Yes, I totally agree with the last two verses....But i will tell you something, may be the people who say ' Oh this poem is great..' and they don't like it, perhaps they say so because they don't want to hurt the poet's feeling but they say it once -in only one poem, not in every poem-..when they say so on the all poems this is called HYPOCRISY! ! .......nice message...10

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Catrina Heart 16 November 2009

Painting beautiful words On an ugly portrait Does not make the dust Under a carpet disappear ----- great metaphors used........fake comments have either ways of....... feeding the pride to inspire and continue to work hard or......... make false belief and the pride fed is as egocentric.........

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam 14 November 2009

''Giving a frog fresh roses will make him elated. Spill the truth and break his heart...'' The line reflects the poet's(your's) feelings. We can understand that you are deprived not only by this fake comments, but also these proxy ppls.

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Tiffany Channell 14 November 2009

So true. keep it up God bless.

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Ala Elouri 14 November 2009

OMG! What ur saying is so true! :) Dude, ur great and keep that up. and ahmm, this is not a fake comment :) ! LOL :) : D

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Slade Oriley 14 November 2009

That is truly deep. Honesty is the best policy. Being lied to can hurt worse than the truth on a matter. This is a great work. Keep writing

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Raj Nandy 14 November 2009

What you say is true! Rather than giving fake comments, it is better not to give any comments! But everyone does not have a positive attitude like you! They react to criticism! Thanks for sharing your frank views! 10! -Raj

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LOVE IT! ! ! how come all of ur poems rock? ? ? grr, not fair! ! ! ! ! lolz. really good poem and it pretty much states the truth.

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Caitlyn Salters 13 November 2009

this is freaking sweet. tehe fake comments mean that the person is not real enough to think of anything good to say hence the fakeness.

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Mark Nwagwu 13 November 2009

fake comments make terible poets - indeed. Writing poems gives me joy and that's enough. You may comment as you wish - fake comments come from fake individuals.

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Glaedr the poet 13 November 2009

Very contrasting words, yet they come together to create their own new meaning. It makes me think and I like that. Well done.

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