Painting beautiful words
On an ugly portrait
Does not make the dust
...
Read full text
Once I had read and recorded it in my handbook...'I can't judge any of you. I have no malice against you and no ribbons for you. But I think that it is high time that you all start looking at yourselves, and judging the lie that you live in.'
wow...that is so true..i likes it...i thought it was funny..thanks for sharing
well, as a poem this is so nice as an idea..i don't like it... am not going to talk more, cuz we have talked abt this a lot through private aren`t we? so keep on writing..but not blaming.. cuz i know you are the greatest poet not a... nice poem actually luwi
Some are born critics and they don't know how to appreciate other's good work. They count holes rather than taking the good aspects in each work. A very good poem you have written here.
Yes, I totally agree with the last two verses....But i will tell you something, may be the people who say ' Oh this poem is great..' and they don't like it, perhaps they say so because they don't want to hurt the poet's feeling but they say it once -in only one poem, not in every poem-..when they say so on the all poems this is called HYPOCRISY! ! .......nice message...10
Painting beautiful words On an ugly portrait Does not make the dust Under a carpet disappear ----- great metaphors used........fake comments have either ways of....... feeding the pride to inspire and continue to work hard or......... make false belief and the pride fed is as egocentric.........
''Giving a frog fresh roses will make him elated. Spill the truth and break his heart...'' The line reflects the poet's(your's) feelings. We can understand that you are deprived not only by this fake comments, but also these proxy ppls.
OMG! What ur saying is so true! :) Dude, ur great and keep that up. and ahmm, this is not a fake comment :) ! LOL :) : D
That is truly deep. Honesty is the best policy. Being lied to can hurt worse than the truth on a matter. This is a great work. Keep writing
What you say is true! Rather than giving fake comments, it is better not to give any comments! But everyone does not have a positive attitude like you! They react to criticism! Thanks for sharing your frank views! 10! -Raj
LOVE IT! ! ! how come all of ur poems rock? ? ? grr, not fair! ! ! ! ! lolz. really good poem and it pretty much states the truth.
this is freaking sweet. tehe fake comments mean that the person is not real enough to think of anything good to say hence the fakeness.
fake comments make terible poets - indeed. Writing poems gives me joy and that's enough. You may comment as you wish - fake comments come from fake individuals.
Very contrasting words, yet they come together to create their own new meaning. It makes me think and I like that. Well done.
it's about time someone said something about that subject, really good poem, i totally agree with Kranthi, what he said said is soo true, thanks for sharing, it was a pleasure to read! ! ! ! (10)