Friday, October 26, 2007
Font Color=black Aged But Never Grew Comments
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Born and raised in a cage
life’s lessons
went untaught
lived your life only for others
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Wandering Scarlet
05 November 2007
great idea, but i think i can use some teaks, it doesnt flow properly in the middle, a few ryms would help, or just attention to sylabols just bein honest :)
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Gold Trybes
02 November 2007
A very well composed poem that tells the reality of self.Good work
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9/6/2025 1:17:21 AM # 1.0.0
Nice concept and sweetly written poem...... Wow is the word