What is this place called life? That lonely thing
Which cruelly wipes out dreams that beings bring?
How then to persevere in living when
These all are doomed: the lives of beasts and men?
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I enjoyed this one very much. The title reminds me of that Frank Sinatra song... The flow is natural even if the language is somewhat old english at time it doesn't distract, at least for me. I think this one may be your best yet! IMHO Sincerely Ronberge
Uumh... a very interesting question indeed. I enjoyed this poem. Thanks! Sincerely, Seán
Well stated. This journey of life is a process shared though our 'discoveries' seem somewhat a lonely adventure! Congratulations. LSP
David K.Z Indeed..perhaps all our meagre selves are one, so lonely we should not become..... I like this poem and the question it provokes. Egal Bohen
excellent write, indeed what is this life if there is nothing more, the questions we cannot answer make it a lonely place.