Monday, August 15, 2005

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What is this place called life? That lonely thing
Which cruelly wipes out dreams that beings bring?
How then to persevere in living when
These all are doomed: the lives of beasts and men?
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David Zvekic
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A Harrie 21 August 2005

excellent write, indeed what is this life if there is nothing more, the questions we cannot answer make it a lonely place.

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Ronberge . 15 August 2005

I enjoyed this one very much. The title reminds me of that Frank Sinatra song... The flow is natural even if the language is somewhat old english at time it doesn't distract, at least for me. I think this one may be your best yet! IMHO Sincerely Ronberge

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Seán O' Muiriosa 15 August 2005

Uumh... a very interesting question indeed. I enjoyed this poem. Thanks! Sincerely, Seán

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 15 August 2005

Well stated. This journey of life is a process shared though our 'discoveries' seem somewhat a lonely adventure! Congratulations. LSP

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Egal Bohen 15 August 2005

David K.Z Indeed..perhaps all our meagre selves are one, so lonely we should not become..... I like this poem and the question it provokes. Egal Bohen

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