Monday, November 21, 2005

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I've lost the joy that used to meet your smile,
And found without its light my life now feels
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David Zvekic
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kskdnj sajn 12 December 2005

Thanks David...enjoyed each verse, the closure, and your last line was very powerful. 'One life's existence makes the other's right.' Perhaps you could publish this one...as part 2/or closure...or something. It is beautiful. Angie

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Theodora Onken 25 November 2005

David-Beautiful and complete! See your in-box...just now read your mail!

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Karina . 21 November 2005

Love this poem..very deep and emotional..that left me feeling a lil sad, Its very beautiful! 10 from me! -K

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