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I've lost the joy that used to meet your smile,
And found without its light my life now feels
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David-Beautiful and complete! See your in-box...just now read your mail!
Love this poem..very deep and emotional..that left me feeling a lil sad, Its very beautiful! 10 from me! -K
Thanks David...enjoyed each verse, the closure, and your last line was very powerful. 'One life's existence makes the other's right.' Perhaps you could publish this one...as part 2/or closure...or something. It is beautiful. Angie