Sunday, October 30, 2005

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Oh! Shut my brain; Don't make me feel
  my pain, your pain, you've made it real.

You've tied down hope; I'm half as tall,
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David Zvekic
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Slimboydim . 31 October 2005

Some moments in your poem i can really relate to, i enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. Kindest Regards Slim.x.

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Angel Smith 30 October 2005

An awsome poem david, it really reaches out to me. kepp it up! ! Angel

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David Zvekic

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