Font Color='#880000'I'Ll See You Through The End [villanelle] /Font Comments

I like it. You successfully broke the rigid rhyming mold of repetitions of 1rst and 3rd line but keeping the aba aba going all the while keeping a pretty tight syllable count. On the whole it makes for a pleasant read with a good rythm. Good job! Amicalement votre, R.

I liked this. The refrain gave it an anthemic quality. It would be interesting to hear spoken out load.