Monday, July 24, 2006

Font Color='#880000'Heaven [english Sonnet] /Font Comments

Rating: 5.0

You've seen these skies under a different star;
its rays caress the winds but not the same
as those that strike on me; their journey's far
from yours; their currents found a different stream.
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David Zvekic
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Joseph Daly 24 July 2006

A very well crafted, and traditional, piece. I love the sonnet it is a great way to experiment with theme and form. You have taken a traditional role here, but you exhibit a good deal of skill. The turn in the arguement (Golden Bough) is well done and very subtle.

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Sandra Fowler 24 July 2006

Elegant, well crafted sonnet.Thank you for sharing. Regards, Sandra

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Zoe Smith 24 July 2006

That is an incredibly beautiful poem. Wonderful writing full of reflections.

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David Zvekic

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