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This poem is filled with way too much sadness. Too much pain of not being understood or loved. Lonelyness can be such a cold shoulder to hunch about all one's life. This is a great sad poem! Do you ever write anything happy? The first page of yer poem's titles seem somber and most macabre nd dark. Still-all in all i gave ya a ten for so much inTENsity and obviously self pity. Buck up-Life can't all be that bad can it now? God bless all poets-MJG.

That poem helped me understand some stuff someone I know is going through... Cheers for sharing it with us it was a real help. Keep writing

I would just like to disagree with the previous comment made by Herbert. This poem is not crap, it is not polution to this site, and how can you say what does and does not meet the requirement of this site! Queen of pain, i think your poetry is amazing, it may be alternative, dark, and not what everyone wants to hear, but its true, pain is real. Dont ever forget that.

If you would not mind, I can give you the addresses of several websites. They cater to crap. It would be greatly appreciated if you stopped polluting this site with whatever you might call it. It's not poetry and it does not meet the minimum requirements of this site (which ain't much) . H