the next morning
her mother called
WAKE UP
time to get your brother ready
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The Story of her end pts 1,2&3 were so real, so cleverly written, my heart was racing for her, my eyes filled with tears for her, i felt the hate of the mother so unaware. You have such a talent dont ever give this up!
that was very good i saw the whoel thing in my head very descriptive! ! !