Sunday, August 18, 2013

Fond Paradoxes! Comments

Rating: 4.3

Night is like Day
always on the cycle
over-bearing on its turn;

Truth is like Fiction
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Shahzia Batool
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 August 2013

A wonderful poem indeed. Paradoxically, nothing means something or sometimes everything...: -)

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Valerie Dohren 25 August 2013

Thought-provoking - opposites are two sides of one coin.

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Yasmin Khan 21 August 2013

It's an exquisite poem Shahzia with many deep and beautiful expressions: ''Life is like death....age is like youth', good very good!

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David Wood 21 August 2013

Lovely poem that I enjoyed reading Shahzia

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Ramesh Rai 20 August 2013

an unique write expressing opposite meaning of each work. wonderful write. loved it

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Yasmin Khan 20 August 2013

It is an exquisite write smeared in wisdom and philosophy of life and woven into a beautiful motif of paradoxes. Well-done 10/10

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Heather Wilkins 19 August 2013

excellent work Shahzia life is like death if spent like evil harming others around

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 August 2013

Wow...wonderful write from you..loved it.

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Farah Ilyas 18 August 2013

its like aww..what a strong projection in just few lines...kudos Ma'am

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Aswath Raman 18 August 2013

A good and content write Ma'am!

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Passionate Reader 18 August 2013

Absolutely brilliant work! ! ! i remember i said once You have SOUND KNOWLEDGE and you really know your work but now i must say you are becoming more PENSIVE and im really LOVING your philosophical writes :))) We have GREAT PARADOXES here, each one of them beautifully described with great compression! ! ! Lovely :)))

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Paul Brookes 18 August 2013

good poetry is like this 10/10 BB : O)

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 18 August 2013

Seeing similarity in opposite things is unique in this poem. Yet each is referred to as a paradox. In reality opposing things are natural, one does not exist without the other. Yet phenomena like smoothness and friction are both beneficial. One makes us move easily and the other lets us stop when needed. Thank you for a beautiful thought provoking poem. My sincere thanks for your thoughtful comments.

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Sallam Yassin 18 August 2013

wise with intermingling faces of the life every thing deceives in someway no one may assure which one is true/well done

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Mohabeer Beeharry 18 August 2013

So much of truth in this.i love it. Sometimes you do not know where to rest your head.its all the same. Well said Mohabeer Beeharry Read my poems sometimes

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