Wednesday, March 24, 2010

Following A Monotone Voice Comments

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Running Laps,
Surpassing the rest,
A voice in my head,
Telling me where I am,
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Tamika Robinson
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Matt Johnston 27 March 2010

This is a nice piece of work. The anxiety and determination is expressed excellently.

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Benjamin Feliciano 26 March 2010

Cross country or track? Or a grander metaphor than sports... Either way, nice work.

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