Thursday, November 3, 2016

Following A Dream Comments

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Down a dim corridor of infinite length
I wander, following a voice that whispers
The atonement of faith.
Past doors half-closed like hidden guilts
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Tom Billsborough
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Bharati Nayak 05 November 2016

My eyes are cauterized, as though at birth, When the world explodes upon A new born child. And I am filled with rapture as I stare - - - - - - - - - You are amazed and wondered at the beauty and full of faith in the Creation.

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Tom Billsborough 05 November 2016

Sometimes we see things suddenly in a different light, Bharati. Is it the rebirth of Faith?

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Pamela Sinicrope 04 November 2016

Sounds like heaven to me. You have a way of evoking beautiful images Tom. Lovely writing. :)

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Tom Billsborough 05 November 2016

I had a vague dream of a long corridor, like those you get in hospitals and a feeling of hope. Glad you liked it, Pam.

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