Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Follow Your Dreams Comments

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to dream your dream, and follow it through
to dream your dream, and make it come true.
to set that goal in your life
and have it become your guiding light.
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louis rams
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Kranthi Pothineni 02 July 2009

Very well written and motivating too. Yes e should follow our dreams no matter happens. ' When dreams are larger then life, we should let it ride by putting ourselves in back seat'...thats what i believe in. Nice poem.

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Christine Kerr 30 June 2009

Beautifully done Louis, You managed to show how far you can go to fulfill your dreams but stepping on toes on the way up will knock you down, passing the others on your way down. The dilemma is well grained in our heads but a certain number of people will do it anyways. The message is very well taken.10++

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well written, well related.. nicely put.. though im not one to follow the stars.. in my heart.. we a re all stars.

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a very well written poem of reality...we should follow our dreams give it everything we have and realise it

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