Saturday, January 16, 2010

Follow The Line Comments

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Just follow the line
The center red line
The directions made easy
For the dimmest of minds
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A.E.J. Jordan
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Wayne Bowen 16 January 2010

Amy..very descriptive poem about crying out and no one cares why. You may want to look at my poem 'Change'. Keep up the good work. You have talent!

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A.E.J. Jordan

A.E.J. Jordan

Detroit, MI
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