Thursday, September 23, 2021

Follow The Clock Way Comments

Rating: 5.0

The tick tick ticking of the clock
tick tick tack never stops
The tick tick ticking of the clock
tick tick tack never stops
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Solomon Terlumun Tule
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Solomon Terlumun Tule 05 October 2021

Thank you ma'am Susan

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Susan Williams 23 September 2021

I like what you have done with this poem--it quite gets under the skin to the point the heart starts tick tick ticking and tick tick tacking --it is almost Poe-like in its rhythm and to me its Poe-like darkness. I am definitely reading more from you. definitely a 5 star poem in my book!

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