Saturday, January 27, 2007

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Rating: 5.0

My massive disappointment in the thing that has been done,
is only overshadowed by my knowing that you're the one,
You have hurt my trust in fairness,
You have bruised my ego too,
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Barry Van Allen
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Linda Weischedel 07 April 2009

Super awesome poem, there are parts I can sortta relate to. Giving you a 10. Hugs, Linda

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Con Nie 12 April 2007

I bet that felt satisfying writing that - especially the last line. :) Sincerely, Connie Webb

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poetry lover 27 January 2007

I liked this poem, nice flow

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