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Clouds followed me onward They needed a shepherd Beautiful.

Adventure! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing.

You looked into the sky and didn't just see nature, but a relationship between you and the clouds.First, they gave you a sense of purpose and direction, then they gave you shelter and finally you were their shepherd. This one of the special traits of poetry you've highlighted, making the world familiar, turning objects into presences, even friends.

Another beautiful piece. I loved the tempo, the metaphors and the visual imagery; makes one feel serene and peaceful. Thank you for sharing, Cigeng.